3rd March 2017

Jack came to show me his impressive writing. Mrs Hilton-Loom  was imporessed with how much his work has improved. He is making much better word choices. Well done jack.
 


Brooke, Kyla, Daniel and Ruby all came to see me from Mrs Nelson’s class. They have been writing their own versions of the ‘Traction man’ story. Their ideas and word choices were very impressive, making exciting stories. They also made excellent use of punctuation in their stories and tried hard to write neatly. Well done to all of them. I had a lovely time reading these stories!
 


Alesha came to show me her wonderful ‘How to make a Pancake’ book. She had written in clear instruction sentences and added pictures. Well done.